
and I have taken up a project, and you are all invited to read along.
We are going to be writing a story together, chapter for chapter.
The first chapter is by both of us, and we are looking for some extensive critique to smooth it out, because as you can imagine, it was difficult to write when each line had to be perfect by
both our standards.
All following chapters are written in the 1st person in the perspective of our appointed characters, mine the active/carefree/almost wild girl Saeth, who likes animals, fighting, and long forest walks and was fostered by a rich dukes family, and Dreaymii's the girl named Vayda, who is also from this family. I can not describe her much because she is not my character and I don't know much about her. only that she doesn't like the rain. I'll be sure to update this so that it doesn't look like i'm glorifying my character and not dreays.
Both girls are the only survivors of the Clandestein family, who's death is just one of their many mysteries.
Please note these chapters are quite short at the moment, but they will progressively get longer as the story improves and whatnot.
Chapter 1:
[link]Chapter 2:
[link]Chapter 3:
[link]Chapter 4:
[link]Chapter 5:
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